I think perhaps you could improve your drawings, and maybe add a little more detail to what you’re are actually writing. I enjoyed looking at your drawings though ; I don’t think I can draw that well on the computer. Next time, if you wanted to make your viewers more interested in your blogs, you could even label some things.
This is an excellent story.Good pictures.
I have a dream. That you will be a great storywriter! Try add more next time you have a chance to write a story.
Impressive writing, lovely story and also very good explanation but I think you should work on your drawing.
I loved this story!
Nice story Ayline but I think you can improve on the drawings.
I think perhaps you could improve your drawings, and maybe add a little more detail to what you’re are actually writing. I enjoyed looking at your drawings though ; I don’t think I can draw that well on the computer. Next time, if you wanted to make your viewers more interested in your blogs, you could even label some things.