I really like your writing. You forgot to do you your capital letters. You wrote some words wrong. Petra I think you have to improve on your capital letters and full stops. Never start a sentence with a conjuction.
That’s very good writing, and very cute dog pictures and impressing information about what kind of dogs you like but to make it better I think you need to check on your spelling.
Well done Petra!Do you like any other animals?
I really like your writing. You forgot to do you your capital letters. You wrote some words wrong. Petra I think you have to improve on your capital letters and full stops. Never start a sentence with a conjuction.
That’s very good writing, and very cute dog pictures and impressing information about what kind of dogs you like but to make it better I think you need to check on your spelling.
I really like dogs too. Can you tell me more about Dogs? What is your favorite type of Dog.
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Yes, you need to improve some spelling.
Cool! I love pugs and cocker poos!
Petra I think that you improved on your capital letters and full spots.