winter poem

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9 Responses to winter poem

  1. fdavie says:

    I like the repeat of snowman. Mabie you could add a bit more ryme?

  2. Iyla says:

    Great! I can see you are a good writer! Mabye add some rhythm. Do you want to be a poet?

  3. snaik says:

    wow! that is just wow!

  4. guilherme says:

    love your poem great effort

  5. Matthew T says:

    This poem is cool!!!!!!!!!
    I like it!!!!!!!!

  6. Frankie G says:

    very nice poem love it so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  7. akarth says:

    Wow! It’s amazing! Well Done!

  8. Elanilaa says:

    That is an amazing poem.

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